You might need more hierarchy on elements you deem important, you have a lot of content, and some of the textured elements might make the page seem busier than it is. I like the overall aesthetic you are going for, but you need to simplify it down if you want people to navigate through it.
Monster does have a reputation for overpriced shite, but the turbines are actually decent, but they are not worth retail, more around the 60$ price range that amazon had them for a while...
I think the card looks well designed, the packaging on the other hand (haha im a graphic designer) I think, could look a little less cluttered, but for the audience its aimed at (tech-people), it is sufficient.
Bought one, then sold it on craigslist for the price I bought it at. There were a couple things I really liked about it, like the design, form factor, and the screen (I could stare at my homescreen all day)