It's getting there! Maybe, adjust the hue to match the tones of the room a bit better...or adjust the hue of the room to be more sunny! Oh and the focus, can't have two infocus bits. Especially off center! Slight photo noise to match the resolution of the two halves a bit better. Then it works!
quoting the picture wasn’t necessary btw.
if it was true you’ll regret it unless you are sure they have an internet connection there. just replace the whole thing with a pool full of chicks.