I tried to capture a shot of Mt. Fuji today, but the weather was less than cooperative. I have plenty of time to try again though!
Mt. Fuji from Lake Yamanaka by davidgevert, on Flickr
You have the mountain, you have crazy clouds piling up on the summit and rolling in off the hills. Maybe a change to the processing would liven the photo up. Saw a photo from Trey Ratcliff today that was taken in dark overcast weather -- and includes a lake, mountains and clouds. Maybe his BlueLake photo would be an inspiration.